Hey xD after you checked my VN, I visited your profile to see what you're working on and boy, am I glad to see what it is! From the get go, I already loved this VN xD From the main menu music to the lovely dogs as well as the cutscenes (the cutscenes are perfect xD I love the comics effect that you put in). I also like how expressive Rex is (Ninja Doggo!?) and I love that 'Call in the Hounds' animation (and all the other animations as well). My favorite character is obviously Rex (and Sparky as well). I like how honest and cheery he is, as well as his energy (definitely his energy). As for Uncle Sparky, I just like how he seemed so tired of everything and he just wants to rest and all haha xD
Overall, I love your characters, the art, the music, the animations, and the overall theme and why you started this VN in the first place (like I read through your devlogs and I really appreciate what you're trying to do!)
and on a smaller sidenote, here's some bugs I found so far:
- After Sean's case was finished, he kind off stayed even if it's no longer his dialogue? Like he appeared if there are pauses or if there's a transition between the convo with Rex and another dog.
- On Perdita's case, the Hounds dialogue appeared twice.
- On the next day, for Princess's case, her sprite disappeared on the What should I do? menu option (I just noticed that whenever there's a menu for each dog case, there sprite should be the one appearing on the menu choices and not Rex)