I really like the whole adventure, its layout and design, but sometimes the english sentences were hard to understand and there are quite a lot of grammar mistakes. I think some english editor would help this a lot.
On the bright side, the survive/solve/save was a great use of Mosh motto and i love the map and color-coded room key guide! (albeit, i´m not sure if it would not be too small to read when printed? i only read it on monitor and i needed to scale the pdf quite a bit to be able to comfortably read it.
Still, really loooking forward for another mosh module of yours ;-)