Hey thanks for the review!
Sorry about that glitch :( I set the game submission as a fixed resolution and didn't test the larger font setting!
That's a fair point about it being long blocks of text, it's something which seems common with most choicescript games since the library doesn't let you much with styling, but perhaps I can break it up more into shorter pages.
I have a good idea in my head of the world and background, yes, that's great you have pointed out story arc is something I should work on so I have something concrete to improve, very helpful!