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There is a small amount of spelling errors here and there, for example: ‘sore’ (tiredness in the muscle)  was written as ‘sour’ (an acidic taste). And there was a problem in the paragraph after Mordred argued with Morgana about Arthur and wanting to make their own choice. When it switched to Morgana’s POV, there was a lot of paragraphs repeat entwined with the next part of the story. But this is really well written, can’t wait for next update!