I just finished chapter 3. I got an error, bypassed with continue. Here it is:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred. While running game code: File "game/ChapterThree.rpy", line 2511, in <module> NameError: name 'helpsarah' is not defined -- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------ Full traceback: File "ChapterThree.rpyc", line 2511, in script File "renpy/ast.py", line 1898, in execute if renpy.python.py_eval(condition): File "renpy/python.py", line 2276, in py_eval return py_eval_bytecode(code, globals, locals) File "renpy/python.py", line 2269, in py_eval_bytecode return eval(bytecode, globals, locals) File "game/ChapterThree.rpy", line 2511, in <module> NameError: name 'helpsarah' is not defined Windows-10-10.0.19041 Ren'Py 7.4.11.2266 With Rain Comes the Flood 0.6.1 Wed Feb 9 21:45:42 2022
In CH3 is mentioned something happened in CH2 (an hot scene, I presume) that I did not see. At a point, in CH2 I had a message telling that something was unblocked for the future, but what? and when?
The plot
Now some thoughts (no criticism, only to let you possibly improve the plot if you wish):
the game started really promising, but it lost something further on, particularly in CH3. I thought that the main scope was to see a sexual relationship between Des and Liv (and possibly later with Megan) and between Liv and Megan. This relations evolved only to a certain level then stopped, with too many re-thinkìngs and doubts. I mean, once accepted their willings they should proceed without any step back.
In CH3 there are too many characters which interfere with the main course, leaving apart Zoey who is acceptable due to what she discovered during the massages.
The discover that Megan is not a natural daughter changes a lot the meaning of the story and cut to half the expectations.
I do not know if there will be a CH4, but I hope so and I do expect to see it anyway. I could have others suggestions if you wish and interested to receive, but in a private messaging. If you want, let me know.
Thanks