hey, i've never commented on itch before, but i felt the need to share how much i loved this! it was personal in the best way possible, and i felt myself sympathizing with the narrator (plot structure, writer, etc.) on (too) many personal levels. it echoed so many of my own cynicisms and in such a raw way that left me wanting more, and I'm so happy you decided to share this beautiful piece of your heart with us. My only critique is that i wish i could've been kinder to the narrator, i enjoyed their existential, philosophical, fed-up ramblings much more than the dialogue options allowed me to express. can't wait to play through the rest of your stuff right now and see what other pieces of art you make in the future. C:
hey! thank you for playing; glad you empathized with the narrative so much!
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about kindness and roasting… maybe, if you haven’t already, you could check out the game file script.rpy and find some answers there! the easiest way to do this would be to download ren’py and open script.rpy with the ren’py editor, atom.
(they’re not good answers, though!)