Excellent story! Love the multiple uses of reflection. The pacing is great, and the touches of humor (her braid! lol!) were well placed.
If I had to nitpick, I could only point out a few places you overlooked in editing ("can't a girl can look good") which I'm sure comes down to the time constraints involved. The ending could probably use a bit more punch, too, but again, that's a nitpick.
Great job! Loved the story.