I would like to echo Manonamora's thoughts. I thought the UI was beautifully done. However, figuring out how to scroll down was quite difficult - you can't make it harder for people to play your game than absolutely necessary, because you've got to rope them in as quickly as possible. I also had a hard time following the story and how it connected to the contest's theme. Still, you should be proud of the overall design! Best of luck.