*spoiler* Imagine this: You are waiting for a train to arrive and instead of boarding the train, you go and get crushed by it. Till here the game is okay and fine, but after that the conversations, i.e. most important part of a visual novel just becomes cringe. The mc somehow knows everything to do, knows everyone, etc etc. This game could have been amazing if you had made it go in stages and a bit longer. Not just "do whatever the fuck you want". Add like an assistant or something who will help you through the game. Also make the intro a bit longer cuz this hass gotta be the most lame intro ever. A lot of people will be willing to help you make the game better. Fix some sentences, and make the game a bit more saturated. Other than that artwork is amazing.
To sum it up , devs I am asking you to make the game a bit more interesting by change dialogue. You just can't ask a girl the kiss you and then after 2 days ask her to become naked (the truth is always hard). Add like an affection meter and perhaps some special scenes (not all scenes have to be nsfw, some could be some cute sfw lust point building scenes). Add character traits, emotions and personalities. Most of us watch anime because of how well desribed the character is. When the character is said, we sometimes feel sad too. When the character is happy, the entire anime becomes joyful. Read some guides on how to write stories and make good characters. It make the make the game really popular and enjoyable.
I'm like 400% sure this and My Hero Rising are actually by the same dude, posing as two accounts, who is using Mad Libs-esque cookie cutter dialogue for these games. For example, the Megumin/Aqua threesome has the exact same dialogue as the Ochako/Momo threesome from MHR. Exact same. It's super sketch, and it concerns me people donate to "these dudes" on patreon.
My Hero Rising ? I think I have seen it but never bothered to check it out. I love every single game no matter how stupid or bad designed it is. But with how easy it is to get a girl naked, I added an exception. I think it also says "dating sim" but we all saw how it went out, right ? If it's a fucking dating sim, why doesn't the dev actually make it a dating sim ?
P.S. - It is. The artwork is just duplicate.
P.P.S - Another game "Hero's Harem Guild" I better : Made by a dev who cares about his community, and makes amazing games.