Woah, this was a trip!
I definitely got a little confused as to who was talking at some points, but I figured it out eventually. I think it was a bit quiet for a music game jam entry. The music didn't even come in until the game was finished! Which was a bit disappointing... I think some nice background jams would have been a good addition.
Other than that, good work! I see the story coming along nicely. I think a bit of info on why the player has amnesia would be another good addition!
Keep it up! Good work!