Well that's not a nice story. But i think you have to develop your writing skills (no offense), i mean, it's like i'm reading a comic or something. I love it! Maybe you can be a good script writer
HAHA! well , English is not my native language so I'm still learning because someday I am going leave my country and also 2020 is my worst year, this memory was the most painful and it took me 1 year to heal my wounds, and technically it was my fault HAHA!
