Such a cool game! I really don't have a lot to criticize, the only thing is, that the text at the beginning was a little bit too much, all the other things were really good, especially the art caught my eye :)
Yes, we can understand how that's an issue. We tried to kind of goof on that with the belligerent narrator, but could also be nice to (after a while) have a button that's just like "screw this I don't like rules" or something to bypass it all.