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Very cute! I enjoyed the environment and character design and animations a lot. Well done.

I wish the movement could have been faster, though. I feel that at least your "sprinting" speed should have been the "normal" speed, and your actual sprint should be even faster. Especially for such a large environment!

The enemies are great at giving you a time pressure of sorts, but I think there could be some fixed hazzards too. But I get it's supposed to be a chill game, so maybe removing the enemies could even work better towards that. More variety of challenges (instead of just clouds you jump on) would be great. 

I know I said your movement speed is too slow. But on the other hand, I'd also enjoy it if the mountainous areas also had stuff to do. I liked exploring them, and would prefer it if there was something to collect or do.

I think the section to the right of where you start has a bit too much waiting. The cloud you have to wait for is super slow, and since you're likely to fail that challenge, it gets a bit boring having to wait for it multiple times. Also, I couldn't access the good thought on the cloud going up from there, which I think you realize since you only need 10 out of the 11 thoughts to finish the game! That was a good decision, I think.

Overall, don't think of these as negative comments, as the game was very enjoyable. It's more along the lines of suggestions in case you want to continue this game :)

Great job!

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Thank you for your feedback!

I kept the speed low to try and control the character a bit more but you make a good point on the speed being too slow for the size of the map. Tested with double speed and it does feel better, thanks for the idea. I could also add items that increase the speed, maybe something to consider. 
I didn't take into consideration the amount of time spent waiting for the clouds. Thank you for pointing that out!

Thank you for all your suggestions, really good feedback that will make the game better.

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Waiting for the clouds was probably not a big deal for you because you are already used to the challenges and so you don't fail often. But for someone playing it for the first time and likely falling off a few times it gets frustrating.

But overall, good job! Are you planning on continuing it after the jam?

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I was planning on starting a new one project with a similar concept that follows a bit more of a story with more objectives than only collecting the happy thoughts. Might be like a Wake up little guy sequel hehe

I enjoyed the game and I think it has really good potential if I put more time into it.