Rated!, still lot things you can improved, but I see you're new, and already lot of people giving you good advices, I have really nothing to add but to congratulate for your game!, a really nice effort making this game, good job! XD, cheers!
also, will you help rate mine too?, I really appreciate every single one! Thanks! XD
https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-7/rate/1415313