Its really nice to hear feedback about the story. When writing such things you never really know if its actually a good idea or if you are the only one who thinks so lmao. Also I have already reduced the collider to the feet and its so much better, and I added text to doors in order to let players know the door is locked and needs a key, I also added text to let people know they need to collect items for the book shelf. A few other changes were done too like adding skip buttons and ways to speed up the text.
Im glad you liked it and the new version will go up after the jam. Thank you!