This is some great advice. I'm new to composing, and I'm kinda learning by myself (did a few courses, read a bunch of books, but I don't work in a team nor anything). I'll certainly keep this ideas in mind (I'm listening to your submission right now, and I already understand what you said about "resting").
Thanks a lot for taking the time to listen and write all this constructive feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed it, but the most important part for me was that feedback. All the best! :)