I generally liked your piece very much. The arpeggio sounded realy cool and was a great overall bridge. The chords in the background also provided a nice background to it. One thing I noticed was that the strings sometimes changed very abruptly which sounded very unnatural to me. Maybe you could have made smoother or fewer transitions there. I understand what you were trying to do with the drums, especially after reading your text, but I think they are too surprising. Instead of complementing the overall track it kinda tries to distract me from it. It kinda makes it hard for me to stay focussed on the track. You could probably achieve the effect you want by throwing in some hectic drum patterns or some noise. Overall I still enjoyed listening to your track, good job!