Hello and thank you for reaching out with such a long, detailed review! I feel like I should preface this with the following disclaimer: this game is intended to be a dramatic, soap opera style game. For that reason, everyone likes the MC, because this is not at all meant to be a portrayal of a realistic romance but instead of intended to be fun, silly and dramatic.
I'm sorry that you considered it to be written badly as I try my best to write enjoyable stories.
As for your criticism re: skip choices, I'm not much of a programmer so what you see is what you get: a free game with plenty of minor faults.
Gabriel's personality is quite brisk as he is a rather serious man. He is not meant to be scary in *any* way. Last but not least, I tried my best to assign clothing value and give each personality type an equal amount of clothing so there might be some over sight for some items.
In any case, I'm sorry that you didn't have a pleasant time with Rose and the gang. I hope you find other titles that are more fun for you to play!
//owl.