I enjoyed the worldbuilding, here -- very much like a medieval or Renaissance-era setting! Perhaps you were going for a live chamber orchestra feeling, but I still think some of the elements could go through an EQ pass or further tuning, like maybe taking a bit of the edge off that percussive string instrument to make it "fit in" better with the other parts. Also, you could consider varying in volume (i.e. having the wind instruments go from piano to forte and back), to create the effect of the parts weaving together more. Really unique stylistic approach, though, nice job!