I'm digging this so far and I wanted to give some slight feedback, I'm sure you've probably noticed some of this already but may as well
- The goal part on spells was quite confusing on the first couple read throughs, I'm assuming it's the DC for actually casting the spell but I might be wrong on that.
- When referring to stats it may be better to refer to them in points instead of levels. Just seems like more common terminology and means you don't have two different things you could mean when referring to levels.
- The conditions are a little confusing, most simply say lower level of (Insert stat), and one could assume you mean by one level, but specification in general can be extremely useful.
That's the major stuff I suppose, there's minor stuff like spelling, grammar, and general appearance but that stuff only really matters in the final drafts so long as it's comprehensible. I haven't played it at all so I can't talk about the games balance right now, but I plan on trying to get some friends together or something soon so that'll be fun. All in all I quite like this so far, and I'm sorry if some of this is just a repeat of what someone else has told you.
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Thank you so much for your feedback! Please let me know how the play through with your friends go. I have yet to play it through myself, hence it definitely not being the final version.
-Thank you for feedback on the spells! I was worried if the way I explained it was confused so this is especially helpful.
-About the stats, I can see your point on this. There are levels to the stats and spells, but I'm worried if I call the stats points that it may be confusing. That's because number associated with character's stats directly refers to the amount of d8 rolled. However, I do think you have a really good point. I'll change it to something else, but I'm not sure points would work. (If I am misunderstanding you on this point, please let me know!)
-I'll definitely fix that for conditions!
The grammar, spelling, formatting, yes I know that needs some fixing. Do you have any specific feedback for formatting that would be helpful to players? Any sections I should move around?
Again, thank you so much for your feedback Eve the Rat Monarch! I appreciate it a lot!
-Bluu (he/they)
Nothing big stuck out about the formatting, it's just a little rough. Readable, but rough. The picture of Owlbert plopped right in the middle of the Palismans list was a little jarring though. I'm a little busy right now but I know I'll forget if I don't respond now, so I'll give it another look over when I'm free and probably edit this for anything else I notice.
I'll keep you posted if I manage to wrangle my friends into playing, but if you need any play testers on your end I'd be more than willing to fill a spot.