i enjoyed the demo!! the art was SUPER impressive, seriously. i love the plot, going on a road trip always seems so new and exciting and even just the demo gave me that feeling a bit. I dunno why some comments don't seem to like it, I think that the english was fine and didnt seem robotic at all! maybe i'm just used to it but it read fine in my brain! i hope you get more reach and more people find it so your kickstarter's funded!