The story idea is ok. I didn't get very far in the game so maybe it gets better. It just teleported you into the same area and had some fights. The fights are standard rpg fights. You have to fight all the enemies. You don't seem to have more story elements there. Nothing really feels like a roguelike. (I think it would be hard to make it feel like a roguelike using rpg maker but maybe you could.)
Plenty of people never make a complete game so congrats. I just think to make it compelling you need more than you have here. More story or make some way to make choices.