So much here to like. The variety in the activities and the writting was great. It was a bit of a mixed bag art wise, it went from feeling really rich to really sparse and I am sure that was probably what was scoped for. It left it feeling a bit too unfinished at times. I found that the mini game elements started out strong but soon became a bit of a chore for the writting to proceed, but because of that I was taking less and less time to enjoy the words and story. I am not sure the word count to game interest ratio was quite right. The amount of care and work that was put into it was excellent and I am sure with all the time in the world it would have been better balanced. Jams are tough on play testing for sure. What can I say other than it has bags of potential and I would definitly play a post jam version with interest.