This was a quick demo to establish characters and begin the story. You left me on a cliffhanger there and I hope I can read the rest in the future. You have your own style of art is a sort of aesthetic handmade type way and that gave the game personality. The writing is a little choppy in some places, like with phone call, I didn't understand the progression of the conversation too well. I like the cheese narrator and the fourth wall breaks here and there. It seems like it's going to be a fun game when it comes out. Good luck with making it!