whoa this is fascinating. it was a bit difficult to get into with a lot of text right off the bat but once I could get my bearings, it didn't take long for me to get deeply invested.
one "complaint", I guess: there's an undefined choice during character design. second to last one, I think? no explanation for what I choosing the color of.
Hi! Thank you so much for the feedback! I'll definitely look over what you've mentioned for the next update!
I'm not sure if the amount of text in the beginning you're talking about is the summary before the story starts (that's definitely something I'm looking to trim down a bit!) or if you meant the actual story, because then it might just be something to get used to? Either way, I'll look over it myself and see if maybe I can divide up some passages at the start to ease into it a bit more!