This was a cute demo. Regarding the kickstarter plans...are you developing any plans for a patreon/Ko-Fi page?
The writing for this first chapter was hilarious btw...but I also agree the pace felt a little bit slow as the chapter progressed.
I'm glad you thought it was funny! xD
I have thought about potentially making a Ko-Fi in the future. I'll update with a dev log and on social media if I do!