You may enjoy A Petal Among Thorns a bit more. It's my second completed work, and it's paced a bit better. Also it's more down to earth.
Thanks, like I say I bought the game, so I hope my criticisms didn't come across as too harsh. I do like it and parts of it did make me chuckle. My issue was purely about the flow and and depth of the dialogue. I'll try PAT
