you have surpassed my expectations, i really thought there wasn't much going on here, a small parody and thats it, but i was sadly mistaken, i loved every moment of this novel that i played, it was fun, awesome, badass, honestly, i usually get bored of VNs because the seem very repetitive, but it didn't get that feeling quite, i was into it the entire time, i have 0 idea how many chapters your going to do but i honestly think you could put this on steam after your finished, i really think that it's that good so far, and if the other chapters are that good as chapter 1, than you honestly have a masterpiece here, keep it up
I did a video on it, its a longer video but you can definitely hear my reactions to sorting things, and not to spoil anything for new comings, that section where two characters talk back and forth after a sorting rock was thrown was just so far, i honestly laughed so hard at that, anyways, keep up the good work