Hey again! Listening to your thing now~ So, first, really nailed the leit motif thing. This sounds taken right out from a boss fight. I really dig the idea, and it reads very clearly what were your intentions.
I will mention, though, that the toned beats are bothering me. It feels like they are in a completely different tone than the rest of the thing (even accounting for the intention of purposeful dissonance). If you ever get around to touching this up again, I'd switch to a non-toned percussion, or change the pitch of the toned beat to match the melody. If it helps me saying so.