I think that this is a very creative submission. I am a big fan of the slow intensity build in the rising tempo of the bass pulse and clock ticking. The melody gives a solemn vibe that I think fits time as a villain well as sort of a silent enemy. I really like the sample of the clock chime you have at the end. I think that if you would have been able to descend one more scale tone, and had the clock chime on that last note, it would have felt resolved and more concluded, but I definitely understand that 30 seconds doesn’t give a lot of wiggle room. Cool entry overall! Thank you for sharing!
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Heya! :) thank you for the comment!
It is actually funny that you say I could have descented one more tone in the scale (I think you mean to the key F) and I almost ended up doing that, but I ended up reconsidering, because I did not want it to be too resolved in order to keep that uneasy feeling going! But I totally get where you are coming from! I was super tempted to resolve it (as that is what my own ear would prefer too), but yeah! ^^
Super cool that you noticed this though! :) thank you for the feedback!