I instantly get Bowser’s Airship vibes from this! I like the care you put into crafting your melody. You have a solid call and response that has nice contour, is interesting, and does a good job “telling the story”, or in this case describing your theme. The pedal bass with the interesting rhythm underneath help energize it too. I wonder if exploring with dynamic changes in your music notation software would help add an extra layer of depth to this piece to help it grow from the first part of the melody into the second repeat. Overall good work! Thank you for sharing!