It's fine but I wish more happened.
P.S. this is quite a long list, please don't think that I'm demanding this or smth. This is all merely a suggestion to possibly help spice things up!:3
Some of the things I think would be cool to add are:
1. Multiple Endings such as:
>Our boyfriend saving us
>Us killing the guy who captured us
>Him getting to jail
>Him allowing us to get out of the room (basement?) but can't exactly leave either.
>Dying at the end (current ending)
2. Using the objects around us to trick him into doing stuff that leads to the diff. endings.
E.g:
> we can use the chair to reach the security camera and cover it with the receipts or the clothes he gives.
>cover the door with the drawer since isn't it heavy
>Expired Food to somehow make him sick
>smash his head with the bible
>use soap to make him slip and drop his head to the floor
>While he's dumping our bf's body in the pit, push him in and close it
3. Other characters that we can interact with for the flow of the story
4. More images about the scenarios like when he dumps the body or when he punches us or kills us to make the player feel more involved.
5. Context
> I just feel like we went straight to it. There's not really a background..? Who is this guy? Do we know him? How do we know him? How long has he been planning this? Who am I? What's the last thing I remember? How did I end up here?
That's all. thanks for reading