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This game is a well crafted masterpiece.

The characterization of all the characters is spot on and I found myself blushing and connecting to the undertale cast before me.


I liked Undertake when it first came out, but I was never a massive fan of it. Yet this piece of fan media has touched me and ignited a love for it I don't think I had before.


You made an adult person blush over a cartoon skeleton like I was 14 again reading my first lemon fanfiction. That takes skill. 


The writing was wholesome and made me feel like I was coming home.. I love all of them and they are my friends and family.


SPOILER; READ NO FURTHER



I played through the genocide run and it broke me. I tried to play through to get the good ending again and found myself emotionally devastated when Chara made me kill Sans. 

I suspected something bad would happen because of my decision to give my soul to Chara to reset the world, but I didn't know that the price would never being able to be with my love again; doomed to kill him again and again.


It made me wish dearly I could undo everything I had done. To make everything right again and never again stray from my SOULmate.


I almost cried when I realized even after deleting and re-downloading the entire game - my old save was still in play. 

Thankfully, I found instructions here to get a clean slate- if I couldn't have found that, I might have been in a foul state of mind all day.


I plan to play through at least one more time to Sans the ending he deserves. 


PS I also like how Sans seems to like the player regardless of what their true soul is. 

Thank you, thank you so much for playing and for your words!  It means so much to know the story had that effect!  If I'm being honest, I really just poured my emotions over the page in hopes that even a drop of it would be felt.

!!! SPOILERS

I think the genocide/True LOVE route was one of the most difficult things about making this.  I wanted to make sure that it was satisfying and heartbreaking the first time around to those that were curious enough.  But at the same time, I needed to make it so that each repetition of a scene made it lose its impact.  And the consequences it would have in a reattempt at the good ending/True Love... that was one of the first things I had planned from the very first brainstorm session for the VN.  And I'm glad that the route and its consequences had that effect on you.  But I'm also glad you were able to get a clean slate.  :)

Also, I wanted to make sure that all the SOUL colors had their bits of flavor (color changes, the description of the SOUL).  But I didn't want that to impact how Sans saw the player.  I wanted Sans to feel connected to the player no matter what their SOUL was.  Kind of like "I love you for you" but without needing to say those exact words.

Thank you again for taking the time to comment and for playing.  I'm glad the VN warmed your heart with love.