Absolutely phenomenal so far! I love the variety of options you've implemented, and everything is very well written. However, I find the explicit inclusion of Quinn's pronouns at their introduction a little jarring. I understand the need for it, and she uses an uncommon set, but it feels... a little off as no one else is introduced in a similar fashion.
My apologies, I know that I'm pointing something out as feeling wrong and not providing a solution. I'm not sure what the best way to go about it would be.
Once more, thank you so much for making and sharing this game! It's an absolute delight.