hmm an interesting read; but like the main character, I just had trouble believing any of it was real. The annoying not helpful Voice, the much more annoying arsehole Rescuer(? maybe as we pass out there is no way to know who did what, and why we are still alive, if we really are still alive) and the Friend whose been around but has obviously never been open and or honest with us. TBH if i was the MC, I would just say "screw this" and leave.
Still I am interested to read on a bit more to see where the story is going and hope maybe it will be able to draw me in. I like the premise you created anyways, if not particularly the characters so far. I know Rude Know It All npcs and Clueless MCs are all the rage these days. But to be honest Im kind of tired of reading that trope over and over.