Neat little story. I'm new to visual novels but I enjoyed the little adventure. My only issue is that Syrup already kind of had a set personality, so when I made choices that went against said personality it kind of felt less like character growth and more like "Yeah, pretend that other stuff didn't happen". I guess my only real complaint is that it wasn't longer, heh.
Good work on the visuals as well (I played the game muted since I'm I often only use itch.io in class, so I can't really comment on the audio). Other than Syrup's abrupt character shifts, I liked the characters and their interactions. They were kind of generic and I think Treat, and to an extent the Chocolate twins, were extremely under utilized (the main problem when implementing side characters in such a short story) but everyone fit the aesthetics and theme pretty well so I can't complain. I'd give this a decent 7.5/10. Good job.