!!!! OMG IT'S HERE!!! I'm so happy! ;O;
Edit: Well... I can't wait to read everything, haha :'D I want to protect James, I didn't expected Chris to be so gutsy and I love it, and I love how we can feel all the attention and thinking you've put in this world and its characters. It also was really nice to read! And I love your choice of musics, and that there's not necessarily music ALL the time!
And as always, your art is so SO good ;U; Good luck with the rest!!! This is already so cool and interesting! *__*
(Oh, i've noticed a mistake here, there's two "the" and I guess it wasn't supposed to be like this? ) :