Super-cool. I was smiling all the way through, and the end was perfect.
One point (rot13): Ng gur raq bs gur tnzr V svefg glcrq gur jbeq lbh va gur obk, naq jura gung qvqa'g jbex V jrag bss ba n jebat cngu sbe n juvyr. Fubhyq vg npprcg lbh nf na nafjre?