Oh I see now, great thanks for answering my questions! As for me your game looks quite completed and thus I was wondering when the Demo should end, and why aren’t you selling the full version of the game yet :) It’s cry and shame some publishers (or even worse - friend) didn’t at least make an opportunity for the game to be bought! But I suppose many of them publishers may be not very enthusiastic about promoting our indie-games in the end :) That’s why we also trying to promote our game relying mostly on our’s strength, at least at the start.
And about your English, I suppose it’s very decent even in informal conversation! While playing your game I hadn’t found out anything too weird in the texts as well ) But maybe it’s due to the whole bizarre style of the art during the story - it’s probably looked even better when the text’s a bit strange itself :D Nevertheless I definitely may try to have a closer look and probably improve texts somehow if you really need this :)
Above all I myself think it’s crucial to divide the Demo and the Full version now. If I were you, I’d block the further content in Demo approximately after the 9-10th episode - somewhere near the episode I stopped playing the game for recording. And then upload the separate Full paid version in Steam. As I see you have about 100 Wishlisted players now, so you will probably get some purchases and the feedback from the full version asap.
Anyway if you need any help or want more feedback or other explanations - you can also write me directly in Discord app: NNDanko (Nirmita RPG)#5719 - coz the Fest is over now, you see )))
Btw I still have some more questions for you, well, we can discuss ’em personally as well (if you want ofc).