man this was really cute i just wanna play it over and over and over again....... u did a rlly good job writing a cute style of bickering for august and kuro and their dynamics were really funny. i think its really good as it is like im not saying this like "oh it would be so good if there was MORE" but its definitely the kinda character set up and world where i felt really eager to learn more and super excited with each new thing revealed - abt layla, especially. i think its specifically bc ur characters r so well presented and charming.
you did a super good job with this and im rlly eager to see what else u make!