I can't believe you had 6 different endings! I'm not to sure if your allowed to use part of a game you were already making for a new game jam. Buuut you posted it. So I may as well leave you a rating and some feedback! I did notice a couple of sentences that didn't really make sense, so maybe check it over a little more closely next time or in an update. I liked that you had art for everything, and that the main characters inventory wasn't entirely empty when the game started! I also found that being able to do whatever part you wanted in any order was great! I would highly recommend putting sound in! Ambient background sound, click sounds, and even sounds when something interesting in the story happens. I liked how your writing story was more laid back and less formal, made the characters easier to relate to. If you want to check out my submission feel free I'll post a link! Let me know what you think. https://itch.io/jam/bite-sized-horror-game-jam-2018/rate/324422
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Thanks for you feedback, very good to hear. Yeah, I started to write the story but didn't really got far or had any motivation in the beginning of October. It wasn't until Bite Sized Horror came that I took it up again and finished the story (that you could pick different characters to be able to get different endings) and all programming and assets was ofc made during the 78h. In the end I tried to adjust the story a little so you would understand that there was a ritual going on but kind of hard to write. :)
Sound and music has always been last thing I've been thinking of, but when playing other games it really gives an extra feeling. Original my idea was to do a voice over, but time has its limits.
I thanks for your feedback and will checkout your game shortly.
Oh, okay! That makes way more sense, your submission should definitely qualify then. :) Yeah making a game in such a short amount of time can be brutal. I was just suggesting the sfx incase you never thought about it lol. Glad your taking the feedback I gave into considerstion. :) and cool, would love to see what type of feedback you give me :)