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This is the story I always wanted to read (for the beginning-mid part anymway !). I had the occasion to read hundreds of stories with relatables chara and epic stories, but none did that AND gave some political vibes, especially about the "violent approach".

The way that "the good people" can be racist, shallow, or violent. Or the bad ones being nice peacful people...

I love all of it !

...I stole (copied) this game on a shaddy website (not bragging, I do that ; no big pockets to try games I won't play to the end) ; but considering, I think I'll pay twice there, and spread the word about how great this game is. I'm really looking forward for more ! Especially Elmo, the story and writing really were something (even if it's a package, music and art were on point too !).

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If I had critics it'd be :

* how unlikely you could wipe off debts by throwing one computer by the window (backups on important stuff wouldn't be on one server)

* how they could use the same car of Amy's parent without being traced back instantly (or at least linked to Amy's parents). 

* In the archive, the bad guy let them destroy the precious steel-memory thing... WHY ?


Also I must say I was a bit disapointed by Rani's ending - while the start was very promising and creative, it kind of ended in bloody-nonsense with a stereotypical joker monster face to face.

It was well written but, meh ! You made a cast with such a depth it's a bit sad to make them end their story this way ; being war hero and then magic trick, get them make a hipy-social fork from nowhere disregarding all what they stood for. Also using a TONE of the providential hero stuff.


(...I've still Norbert's ending to read, amen !)

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Thank you for your comment (and purchase!) We're glad you liked it! And all your criticisms are very valid points we have thought about ourselves after the game was released. We'll be doing better work with our next game <3

Looking forward to it ! <3