The premise of the story is interesting! I'd love to see more of it.
However, based on my perspective, there's some parts that are little hard to understand, how the pacing goes a little too fast on the realization of the MC being transported, how does the MC immediately knows what to do ater meeting the characters, and a little mistake in the spelling and grammars (I understand if you are a non native english speaker, because I am also one myself)
Besides, I still enjoyed the story. I wish you good luck on your writing development, dear author!