I appreciate that the story was short and to the point. Life is short, time is short, there are too many games and not enough time :). I'm a big fan of the crisp design, it's clear where my eyes should look and each conversation point is short so as not to get wall-of-texty, which keeps my attention span happy. One thing which I felt was off, was that Heidi is smiling in every portrait, even though they're supposed to be expressing surprise or worry etc. Apart from that, even though I said I appreciated that the story was short, it probably could've been longer and I'd have happily kept tuned in.