Well that was unexpected! Usually, these narrative heavy games don't do it for me, but the voice acting was superb and the story was short and concise. Perfect for a jam. Well done!
It would have been nice to see some other element to gameplay, but this nicely achieves what it sets out to do. If I could pick one thing to "improve", I think it would just be font consistency. The flowy, curvy dialogue against the more standard menus and choices felt a bit mismatched. I understand they should be different, but something felt a little off.
Overall, super well done. Congrats on finishing your submission!