First I wanna say I found your game recently and really liked it, so far the story seems interesting and the guys are hot, which isn't that what truly matters. Though as for the things you wanted feed back on, I have an opinion or two.
1. Honestly so far the game seems really solid not really anything I think you should change. MC is going along with Torent and Ayer, but isn't blindly trusting them, especially since the two don't seem to have any qualms with messing the MC's mind. I personally would be a bit more vocal/upset with the mind reading and mental manipulation, but MC's reactions to the whole thing seems solid.2. One thing I'd like to see is a bit more information about magic and the Scions. Like, is all that's required to be a Scion is to have an affinity for one of the primordial gods elements, if so then could any of the magic users from MC's home have been able to become a Scion or is there something specific about MC, Thur, and Yerbel that makes them Scion worthy.
3. For Torent's belly I think both could work cause, on the one hand abs make sense for a powerful god to have, on the other hand he gives off so much big soft dad energy that I could also see a soft belly working. Maybe a muscle gut, a big soft belly but if you push down you can feel the abs underneath.