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"The secret base is literally labeled secret base, the mercenary store is labeled mercenary store. The forbidden door is labeled forbidden door. ha. ha. "

This is the most annoying nitpicking I think I've ever seen about a game. Could you not find something to criticize besides that?

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It's the only thing worth criticizing, IMO. It's low-effort writing. This constructive criticism is under all the wonderful pros listed and followed up with:
"All this being said, it's still light years ahead of many other visual novels I've found on this site in terms of attempted humor."

Believe it or not, I'm trying to help the publisher with my honest opinion about what did and didn't work for me personally, not nitpick. They directly asked for feedback.

Perhaps internet message boards are not the best place for you, emotionally.

"It's the only thing worth criticizing, IMO. It's low-effort writing." Which is it? Is there nothing worth criticizing or is it low effort?

???
You don't seem to understand words.
So, I guess I will wish you the best of luck.