The story is faulty at best, didn't really interest me, didn't make me feel like i wanted to read all that text, or follow along with the narrative. Though, my biggest issue with the game is that you didn't capture the characteristics of the devil, you see, he is powerful, and humans are worthless to him, you couldn't care less about them, he doesn't need to got out there and capture innocent souls. Instead in most cultures, the devil is portrayed as an evil master-mind, he gets in your head, makes YOU think you are the good person, whilst doing something bad, makes you worship the devil, and overall deludes you, for his own pleasure and gain. Or even worse, tricks you into deluding yourself, until you go mad, and eventually go to hell for all this, he thrives on peoples suffering and regret and anger as they realize they've been fooled, and are paying the price in hell for their wrong doings.