I don't know if this is the right place to note this, but I found a couple typos. On Week 2 Day 2, if you're on the Security team, there's the line "I sat there for my tnire shift, bored out of my mind." I'm guessing that's supposed to be "entire" rather than "tnire".
In the medical team branch, the dialog mentions Iris handing you a "crisp white uniform", but the uniform the sprite is wearing is blue.
On Week 2 Day 4, there's the line "Iris was feverently trying to duck...", I think that's supposed to be "fervently".
Really enjoying the demo so far, looking forward to the full game!