Congratulations on the release!!! <3
Issues-wise, I did come across a lot of typos; misspellings and the wrong word being used (gender being used in place of genre, for example), and the stalker (attempting to avoid spoilers here) seemed far better implemented into some routes than others; Leonard's seemed to just go ignored after one scene while Lawrence had a full resolution to that plot line, for example.
THAT ASIDE THOUGH
I love this!! haha
The characters are very interesting, and the setting and premise is so appealing! Love seeing an older cast in an otome so, so much! I truly didn't expect to end up liking some as much as I did too! (Edgar in particular just isn't the type I usually enjoy beyond wanting completion, and yet I really did find myself enjoying his route.) Fox had my heart from the moment I saw him, and meeting him solidified that - I am so looking forward to the eventual updates with his route especially!
Side note; Christy, I love you, never change.